will you go over my resume and tell me what to improve what i need/miss

Dan G asked:


Objective: Seeking a challenging position police officer for Lower Salford Township

Summary Of Qualifications
•Bilingual-fluent in both English and Spanish
•Able to make difficult decisions in stressful situations
•Qualified marksman shooter in small arms and assault weapons
•Proficient in computer software and hardware

Experience

2004-2008 U.S Marine Corps

•Supervised, developed and trained Iraqi police- Efforts resulted in a significant decrease of abuse of power and corruption.
•Conducted over 300 combat security patrols in an urban environment.
•Provided leadership, instruction, and supervision of a fireteam of marines- Efforts led to the arrest of known insurgents and criminals.
•Conducted personnel, vehicle, and private property searches- Efforts led to the finding of many weapon caches and IED’s (improvise explosive devices).
•Operated and maintained $2 million tracked vehicles with highly sensitive radio equipment.

Training
•Introductory military training
•Marine Combat Training
•Peace and wartime government detention
•Chemical and biological warfare training.

Education
•U.S Marine Corps Specialized Training: Explosives, Firearms, Leadership
•High School Diploma

Awards
•Iraq Campaign Medal
•Marine Corps Good Conduct Medal
•National Defense Service Medal
•Global War On Terrorism Service Medal
•Two Sea Service Deployment Ribbons

thank you bonasofa.
now do i put a period in every line?
what about
“and supervision of a fireteam of marines” is it ok that i got to of’s that close? does that sound correct?
Objective: Seeking a challenging position as a police officer for Lower Salford Township

does that sound good?